Superb writing Nicole I love the way you observe people in crowd but leave their purpose in flux - the wine drinker - an alcoholic? unbalanced? or listening to music? Flexing the readers mind several times without over-focusing - this is good writing. And just skimming from 'fly' to 'man in white shirt'. Then quickly we know her motivation, just as quiickly saddened by it, then boom happily ever after. Love it.