I see a critique on a variety of aspects of society, not least hypocrisy itself -- Dylanesque in detail -- but really Shakespearian -- of bigger things -- but will they heed the warning of the ides of March? A metaphor -- -- You have answered that by writing it -- probs not! But they aren't the insightful poets! Else they would see the fall coming.
So I love the ideas Lizzie -- I love the alliteration -- love the tune too -- great addition -- if I were to have any criticism, I would say, and I have no real right given my exploits -- lol -- but it could be a tad esoteric in the cryptic department! But as I say, I can't be relied on with such an observation -- lest risk you writing a poem about me -- lol -- Keep the poems coming Lizzie -- you have the scheming lizard brain and definitely the ability to do so -- All that said, I just love this type of excursion into society